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the_cupcake Posts: 348 Joined: 2004/06/16	2005/01/14, 12:40 PM The mere glance from your eyes beckon me to lose myself in your arms. Your every sigh makes me shiver, because I feel like I'm falling into an endless abyss. Into an ocean of you. My name whispered by your voice becomes a litany from the heavens. But they inevitably spell my doom. It becomes a deep looming sadness and a joyous song. Moments with you are like fairy tales. The sheer sweetness of it all mingled with a bitter pang that I can't have more. That this time is all I have. A few seconds of bliss followed by hollow hours, days, months... Emptiness is what I have to endure without you. And I ache for every second that you're not here. Your voice. Your smile. Your eyes. Your memories. The thought of your arms. The merest dream of you. These are my salvation. Yet you are the reason for my fall. ----- okay so I'm feeling sappy today. :(
howdiekat Posts: 1,345 Joined: 2003/05/22	2005/01/14, 01:04 PM cupcake, i had no idea you felt this way about us :) just kidding, that is absolutely gorgeous. if this is your work, i am very impressed. -------------- i wish you ill, ice-t. margarine is a liar who announces, "i am butter!"
the_cupcake Posts: 348 Joined: 2004/06/16	2005/01/14, 01:13 PM *blush* yeah I made it. I felt sappy, for no apparent reason. Well..there is a reason, but I don't like admitting it. I miss everyone here too! thanks for making me feel better howdie :) -------------- The only way to defeat fear is to treat it with respect. Take it by the horns, stare deep into it's eyes, analyze it and overcome the ugly bastard. Now for the love of god...put the donut...DOWN!!! -cupcake-
jonathanweaver Posts: 576 Joined: 2004/06/14	2005/01/14, 01:59 PM That was excellent. Very nice! -------------- --Click here to insert a clever message-- Jonathan
hecdarec Posts: 2,457 Joined: 2003/12/16	2005/01/14, 03:16 PM FOREVER IS NOT LONG ENOUGH Every second that we spend together, I crave to make it last forever If I could make that second last forever, I would want to spend forever, together Time with you is so precious, I never want it to go by too fast The feeling I obtain when I am with you, I want it invariably to last. Baby forever with you is not long enough Every second of the day I long for your touch Forever with you could not satisfy my needs Forever is long but it’s shorter than it seems Gazing intently at the stars, with you by my side Makes me wonder if our love, can withstand the test of time Feeling the cool breeze from the air, as it brushes against our faces Gives me positive reinforcement, that we are going high places Baby forever with you is not long enough Every second of the day I long for your touch Forever with you could not satisfy my needs Forever is long but it’s shorter than it seems Every night while we sleep, I pull you close, and I hold you tight, and I beam as I realize, that we are together for another night It seems like only yesterday, that our eyes locked for the first time I only hope that our eyes continue to lock, until the end of time Baby forever with you is not long enough Every second of the day I long for your touch Forever with you could not satisfy my needs Forever is long but it’s shorter than it seems -------------- I am from Philadelphia, for all the people who keep posting the infamous where are you from thread.
ATIGER Posts: 992 Joined: 2003/02/26	2005/01/14, 03:19 PM The sensitive side of Hec. But wait... isnt that an Air Supply song?
the_cupcake Posts: 348 Joined: 2004/06/16	2005/01/14, 04:27 PM Somehow I smell a scathing remark after that. *braces herself* -------------- The only way to defeat fear is to treat it with respect. Take it by the horns, stare deep into it's eyes, analyze it and overcome the ugly bastard. Now for the love of god...put the donut...DOWN!!! -cupcake-
Carivan Posts: 8,542 Joined: 2002/01/20	2005/01/14, 09:30 PM I didn't know that's how they felt after training with me???:big_smile::big_smile: -------------- If you can dream it, if you can imagine it, then you can be it, you can do it. If it is meaningful enough, and you commit the energy of your passion, you will. Ivan carivan@freetrainers.com Montreal Canada
hecdarec Posts: 2,457 Joined: 2003/12/16	2005/01/14, 08:03 PM I wrote it and recited it to my wife before I proposed. -------------- I am from Philadelphia, for all the people who keep posting the infamous where are you from thread.
asimmer Posts: 8,201 Joined: 2003/01/07	2005/01/15, 08:33 AM Carivan, that is how I felt about you the minute i joined freetrainers. Infact, I love you all and every minute that I am away from the keyboard is an endless agony, a purgatory of lonliness and an eternity of anguish. I , personally, love time by myself....
hecdarec Posts: 2,457 Joined: 2003/12/16	2005/01/15, 08:40 AM I am so glad that you feel that way asimmer -------------- I agree with everything asimmer says.
Pritchard Posts: 1,212 Joined: 2004/03/02	2005/01/15, 11:05 AM a turtle poem ------------- little turtle walking by near to the earth, far from the sky, never fast but he tries, a little turtle walkng by. -------------- shut up adam. A.D.F.
Anni313 Posts: 1,790 Joined: 2004/03/04	2005/01/15, 11:07 AM That's lovely Pritchard! -------------- Anni ******* Quoting Michael: Your future is beckoning, pay attention to the call.
Carivan Posts: 8,542 Joined: 2002/01/20	2005/01/15, 11:17 AM :laugh::love:
Pritchard Posts: 1,212 Joined: 2004/03/02	2005/01/15, 11:19 AM well you know, someone had kill the romantic tone. ive got hundreds of things like that written, and other more serious and heart felt stuff. i wrote that when i was 11, and i just remebered it, i dont even know where the book i wrote it in is. -------------- shut up adam. A.D.F.
Anni313 Posts: 1,790 Joined: 2004/03/04	2005/01/15, 11:39 AM I love turtles so found it especially poignant. -------------- Anni ******* Quoting Michael: Your future is beckoning, pay attention to the call.
rev8ball Posts: 3,081 Joined: 2001/12/27	2005/01/15, 11:08 PM < after reading Hec's and cupcake's poem, watches his T levels crawl into the basement... :( -------------- Michael 100% AMMONIA SNORTIN, ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASS FAILING, BIG IRON LOVIN, FACE SLAPPIN, HEAVY METAL LISTENIN, CHALK CLOUD MAKIN, GUM BLEEDIN, SCABBY-SHINNED, LEATHER PALMED, BLOOD-SHOT EYED, KNEE WRAP WEARIN, RIP IT UP OFF THE FLOOR, DO OR DIE TRYIN, FAILURE IS NOT AN OPTION, BAR BENDIN POWERLIFTER. You got a problem with that?
puresnowchic Posts: 151 Joined: 2004/07/28	2005/01/15, 11:29 PM Those are REALLY good poems I am impressed big time!! -------------- My mind tells me to win, my spirit shows me how, and my body delivers. Cari PureSnowChic@aol.com Southern California